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    Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

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    Good Afternoon Rams Fans!! Good Luck this Week!

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Forget what I said ... PM sent ....
    Last edited by RamsInfiniti; -10-28-2010 at 11:21 AM.

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Quote Originally Posted by RamsInfiniti View Post
    Wow, that was horrid ... For so many reasons ....
    Care to explain? Maybe I can improve..

    Comments without solutions really doesn't benefit anyone ya know

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Quote Originally Posted by EmDiggy View Post
    Care to explain? Maybe I can improve..

    Comments without solutions really doesn't benefit anyone ya know
    You picked the Panthers on the Rams board. Probably will get a better grade on the Panthers board. ( by the way, I think your stuff is fine)

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Well I don't know what was horrid about it but your speech wasn't the best you've done. Just seemed like you needed to slow down alittle.

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Good analysis, but:

    1. Yeah you should have picked the rams instead
    2. You talk way to fast then catch yourself and start saying uhh..or just get lost in your own speech. So slow down and enunciate more I guess.

    Agree with most of it other than the rams loss though

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Very good. Your delivery is slowly getting better. You can practice by reading aloud when you are alone.

    Read things that are tough on your vocabulary. New York Times articles, etc....

    You are a smart guy but the pressure gets to you on camera.

    Once the preview starts you begin to get into a better flow and it gets better and better as the segment makes you forget about your anxiety.

    Your content is exceptional. Your organization is great too. Just concentrate on being a person on camera and not a reporter. Pretend you are talking with a person behind the camera and not TO the camera.

    Overall, you are very good and I look forward to you having a calm cool video by the end of the season.

    Once again good job and Nice Suit. !!

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Quote Originally Posted by sjacksonrules View Post
    Well I don't know what was horrid about it but your speech wasn't the best you've done. Just seemed like you needed to slow down alittle.
    Thanks SJR!! Thats my constant issue.. is controlling the pace in which I speak..sometimes I get on a roll and its insane.. I'll improve on the next one.

    Quote Originally Posted by fearsome foursome View Post
    You picked the Panthers on the Rams board. Probably will get a better grade on the Panthers board. ( by the way, I think your stuff is fine)
    LOL! I thought that what It might have been

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    Re: Football Gameplan's 2010 Week 8 Preview Video - Rams vs Panthers

    Quote Originally Posted by EmDiggy View Post
    Care to explain? Maybe I can improve..

    Comments without solutions really doesn't benefit anyone ya know
    You look great, like a true professional, you have a nice set, you made a few valid points before I couldn't listen anymore ...

    After about 90 seconds, I couldn't listen anymore because the flow was way off. I don't even know who you picked or why. I think someone mentioned it here, just slow it down ...

    Since the set looks good, and you, yourself, are very presentable, there is no reason this video couldn't have been 6 or 7 minutes. People won't get tired of watching you, but they want to be able to easily understand what you are talking about. If they cannot get into the flow of your delivery, they'll turn it off ....

    I guarantee I know a way to make your delivery better. Talk to your mirror ....

    Maybe a little more structure would do, or a sidekick even, to break up the monotiny ...

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